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Chapter 6 - The Trap at Elmwood Drive

The rain began to fall in sheets as the police cruiser carrying Ethan and me turned onto Elmwood Drive, its headlights blacked out to avoid alerting anyone inside the neighborhood. Two unmarked tactical vans followed close behind, carrying eight SWAT officers equipped with non-lethal breaching tools and body armor.

The house sat shrouded in darkness. The warm, inviting home where Ethan had grown up and where I had spent years caring for Eleanor now looked like an ominous tomb. The front porch light was dark, but through the second-story blinds of the master bedroom, a faint, rhythmic beam of a flashlight flickered against the ceiling.

“They’re inside,” Detective Miller whispered from the front passenger seat, watching through a pair of night-vision binoculars. “They bypassed the front door. The lock on the basement cellar was crowbarred open.”

“I know the layout of that house better than anyone,” Ethan said, leaning forward between the front seats. “If your tactical team goes through the front door, the stairs will creak. There’s an old laundry chute in the back pantry that leads directly behind the master bedroom closet. If they hear you coming, Arthur will barricade himself. He keeps a hunting rifle in his gun safe.”

Detective Miller nodded grimly. “We don't want a barricaded hostage scenario or a shootout in a residential neighborhood. Sergeant, deploy the perimeter snipers. Team Alpha, breach through the basement door quietly. We move on my mark.”

“Wait,” I spoke up, an idea striking me with absolute clarity. “Arthur thinks I’m still at the hospital with Ethan. He doesn't know we know about the safety deposit box key. Let me call his cell phone.”

Miller turned around, raising an eyebrow. “What’s your play, Mrs. Vance?”

“If I call him and pretend that Eleanor just passed away in the ICU, he’ll think he won. He’ll think the police have classified it as heart failure and that Ethan and I are completely broken. It will lower his guard. He won't be rushing to grab a rifle; he’ll take his time searching for that key.”

Miller exchanged a glance with the tactical sergeant, who gave a slight nod. “You have sixty seconds to buy us entry time. Keep him talking, keep his attention locked on the phone, and do not make him suspicious. Can you do that, Lucy?”

I took a deep breath, steeling my nerves. “Dial the number.”

Ethan gripped my hand tightly, giving me an encouraging nod. I pulled out my phone and dialed Arthur’s direct cell.

It rang once. Twice. Three times.

On the fourth ring, the line clicked open. The sound of heavy, labored breathing filled the receiver.

“What do you want?” Arthur hissed, his voice strained with tension and physical exertion. In the background, I could hear drawers being ripped open and wooden furniture being overturned.

I forced my voice to crack, summoning every ounce of sorrow and exhaustion I had felt over the last twenty-four hours.

“Arthur… oh God, Arthur…” I sobbed into the receiver, making my breath hitch convincingly. “She’s gone. Eleanor is gone.”

The noise of tearing wood stopped instantly. The line fell dead quiet, save for Arthur’s sharp inhale.

“What did you say?” he whispered.

“Her heart stopped ten minutes ago,” I wept, letting out a convincing, ragged gasp. “The doctors tried everything, Arthur. They said the fluid around her heart caused massive arrhythmia. Ethan is on the floor… he’s completely destroyed. He can't even stand up.”

A long, suffocating pause hung between us. When Arthur spoke again, the faux-grief he usually wore was entirely gone. In its place was a sickening, arrogant smugness that made my blood run cold.

“I told you she was dying, Lucy,” Arthur said, his voice smooth, triumphant, and dripping with malicious satisfaction. “I told you it was her time. You and Ethan should have listened to me. You caused her unnecessary pain by dragging her to that sterile hospital.”

“Where are you, Arthur?” I cried. “The hospital needs you to sign the release forms for the mortuary. The police said they won't file any charges if you come sign the paperwork. Please… Ethan needs his father.”

“Tell Ethan that his father is starting a new life,” Arthur spat coldly. “He was always weak, just like his mother. Always clinging to sentimentality while I carried the weight of this rotting family. Tell him goodbye, Lucy.”

“Wait! Arthur, where is Caroline?”

“Caroline is right beside me, counting our future,” Arthur chuckled, a dark, raspy sound. “And by morning, we’ll be across international waters.”

*CRACK!*

The explosive sound of a hydraulic battering ram splintered through the receiver, followed instantly by the deafening roar of flashbang grenades echoing from the house across the street.

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