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Chapter 1 - The First Drop (approx. 800 words)The burn was immediate, stealing the air straight from my lungs. People still laughed, their chuckles echoing in the vast, chandelier-lit glass conservatory like broken glass. They thought it was a bit. They thought my younger sister, Fallon—the reigning princess of carefully curated internet drama—had simply executed another viral stunt to keep her engagement metrics climbing.

“Keep filming,” she had said.

Those two words were her signature. Every emotional beat of her life was scripted, edited, and monetized for an audience of millions who didn’t know her. But as I clutched the edge of the mahogany banquet table, my fingers digging into the polished wood until my knuckles turned white, I knew this wasn't a joke.

My cheek felt like it was resting against a hot stove. The fluid—initially disguised by a pale pink tint and floating edible glitter—had splashed directly into my left eye, and the agony was blinding.

“Sloan?” Greer’s voice cut through the ambient panic of the room. My best friend and coworker had materialized beside me, her strong hands wrapping around my wrists before I could smear whatever chemical was eating through my epidermis into my cornea. “Don’t touch it. Keep your hands away from your face.”

“It burns,” I wheezed, tears streaming uncontrollably from my right eye while my left refused to open. “Greer, it’s not punch. It’s... God, it’s eating my skin.”

Across the dance floor, Fallon’s pristine smile twitched. The three shoulder-mounted cameras operated by her hired production crew didn't drop an inch; they zoomed in, capturing every micro-expression of my distress. Fallon had spent the last six months complaining that her engagement content was "flat." She needed an arc. She needed a villain, a redemption, and a spectacle.

And she had cast me as the collateral damage.

Our mother, Sybil, bustled over in her floor-length champagne gown, looking less like a mother concerned for her eldest child and more like an executive producer whose timeline was running behind schedule.

“Oh, for heaven’s sake, Sloan,” Sybil hissed, her voice sharp and dripping with absolute annoyance. “Get up. You’re making a scene. It’s just a harmless prank for the reel.”

“A prank?” Greer whirled around, her eyes blazing. She was a senior risk analyst alongside me, trained to spot liabilities and systemic failures. Right now, she looked ready to commit homicide. “Look at her face, Sybil! That isn’t punch! That’s a chemical burn!”

“Don’t be dramatic,” Fallon chimed in, walking closer on the arm of her newly minted husband, Evan Mercer. Evan looked equally unconcerned, adjusting the lapel of his tuxedo while his eyes darted toward the overhead lights to check the shadow angles. “Sloan has always hated being the center of attention unless she’s complaining about spreadsheets. It was a sparkling rosé cocktail with a little edible luster dust. Right, Evan?”

Evan nodded smoothly. “Totally harmless, guys. Keep the cameras rolling, let's get back to the first dance—”

“Shut up,” I managed to choke out, leaning heavily against Greer. The heat was radiating down my neck, sending electric spikes of pain into my jawline.

The venue manager, a tall man named Marcus who had looked nervous about Fallon’s massive production crew all evening, finally pushed his way through the cluster of stunned guests. He took one look at my blistering skin—which was rapidly turning a angry, angry crimson—and the heavy scent of citrus-scented industrial solvent that had begun to overpower the white roses.

“Ma'am,” Marcus said, his voice dropping an octave as he looked at Fallon. “What was in that glass?”

“It was just a drink!” Fallon snapped, her digital poise finally beginning to fray at the edges. “Ask the bartender! We used a custom mixer—”

“The bartender went home an hour ago,” Marcus replied coldly, tapping his radio. “And your catering team didn't serve anything that smells like paint stripper. Security, lock the doors. Nobody leaves this conservatory.”

Fallon’s face drained of color. “You can’t lock the doors. We have a live stream—”

“I don't care about your live stream,” Marcus interrupted, staring directly into the red tally light of the nearest camera. “Someone just poisoned a guest. We are calling the authorities.”

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Greer pulled me toward the exit, shielding my face from the blinding studio lights. “We’re going to the ER, Sloan. Hold onto me.”

As the heavy glass doors of the conservatory swung shut behind us, cutting off Fallon’s frantic protests, I realized something terrifying: my sister had tried to humiliate me on camera. But she had miscalculated. And by the time the doctors looked at my face, my sister’s fairytale wedding was about to turn into a crime scene.

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