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Chapter 3 - The Call from ParisI stared at the glowing screen. The international number sat there, blinking silently in the quiet room.

"Who is that?" Sarah asked, watching my expression tighten.

"It's the hotel in Paris," I said, my mouth suddenly dry. "I made the reservation under my name, using my credit card as a guarantee, expecting my parents to reimburse me before we left. Obviously, they never did."

"Do not answer it," Sarah advised firmly. "Let them figure it out. They’re adults."

"If I don't answer, they'll just charge my card directly for the entire stay plus whatever incidental expenses they incur," I replied, feeling the panic rising in my chest. "My card is already maxed out from the flights. If they hit it for the hotel too, I'll be buried in interest rates and overdraft fees."

I took a deep breath, picked up the phone, and swiped to answer.

"Hello?" I said.

A polite, heavily accented female voice came through the line. "Bonjour, Ms. Castillo. I am calling from the front desk of our boutique hotel in Paris. We have four guests checking in under your reservation name—Mr. Richard Castillo, Mrs. Diane Castillo, and Ms. Danielle Castillo... and an additional guest."

"Yes," I said steadily. "I am aware. However, as I notified your property earlier, I am not traveling with them, and I will not be checking in."

There was a brief pause on the line.

"We understand that, Ms. Castillo. However, we have a complication. Your mother, Mrs. Diane Castillo, is currently standing at the front desk. She has presented your confirmation number, but when asked for a credit card for the room deposit and remaining accommodation balance, she stated that you are responsible for the entire bill."

My jaw tightened. Even across the Atlantic Ocean, true to form, my mother was trying to dodge financial accountability.

"Listen to me very carefully," I said, raising my voice slightly so Sarah could hear every word. "I am revoking authorization for my credit card to be used for any charges incurred by those guests. They must provide their own payment method."

The hotel representative sounded slightly alarmed. "Ms. Castillo, your card is currently attached to the reservation as the primary guarantee. Under our policy—"

"Cancel the guarantee," I interrupted. "If they cannot provide their own valid credit card or cash payment right now, you are free to cancel their reservation or require them to find alternative lodging. I am cutting off all financial support effective immediately."

Before the hotel employee could respond, I heard a familiar, screeching voice in the background of the call.

“Valerie?! Are you on the phone with them?! Don’t you dare cancel our rooms! Put her back on, right now!”

It was my mother. The phone had clearly been put on speaker, or she had lunged across the hotel desk.

"Mom," I said, my voice dropping into a register of cold, absolute steel. "I am not paying for your hotel."

“Valerie, have you lost your absolute mind?!” my mother screamed through the phone, the harsh audio echoing slightly in Sarah’s living room. “We are standing in the lobby of a five-star hotel in Paris, exhausted from a transatlantic flight, and you are pulling this stunt over an airline seat?! Your father has a heart condition! Do you want him to drop dead in the streets of France?!”

"If Dad has a heart condition, maybe he shouldn't have spent his energy assaulting me at the Atlanta airport," I shot back, my hands shaking with adrenaline.

“That was a family disagreement! You provoked him!” Mom shrieked. “You booked this trip! You put it on your card! You promised us this vacation! You are legally and morally responsible for getting us settled!”

"I booked a trip for us, Mom. Not for you to hijack, insult me, hit me, and then expect me to fund your European holiday while I sit at home with sixty-one dollars in my bank account," I said, my voice unwavering. "You are on your own. Pay for your own hotel, or take the next flight back to Atlanta."

“Valerie, I swear to God, if you do this, you are no longer my daughter! We are cutting you out of this family forever!”

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"Consider it mutual," I said.

I hit the red button, ending the call, and threw my phone onto the couch.

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